Critical Review: 11 March 2014: Tracy

Feedback: The idea of moving away from the sequential was positively received. Kartini expressed her view that this was a good change in direction.

Tracy wanted more cropping and more detail. Some particular ones will need to be cropped to maintain the impact.

The size of the final display was discussed. In general term big is good, but number to be displayed will be proportionately reduced.

I mentioned the idea of 5 final images… Kartini thought 6…  but size and cost are the key factors at play here.

Seeing the image of Jaime on the wall … it is a little dark, and the background pink milk needs to be lightened. Image lacks punch. In general the milk backgrounds need real thinking about and work in Photoshop to get the balance correct.